I struggle sometimes to find the right words to capture the image I'm trying to paint. For example, I was stumped recently by the sound feet make on sand. What is it? I can hear it in my head, but I'll be darned if I know the word that gives one the sense of feet squeaking across a beach.
Do you have similar challenges? How do you come up with the right word or words that best capture the emotion and feel for a scene?
What is the sound a person's feet make walking on sand?
Sean Smith is an award winning conservationist and author. He is a former National Park Ranger at Yellowstone, Glacier, and the North Cascades. He is a TEDx speaker, and private pilot. He graduated from the University of Washington in 1989 with a degree in Political Science. He got his master's in Natural Resources Management from Central Washington University in 1996. He currently runs Washington State's efforts to reduce and eliminate toxic chemicals from consumer products and serves as the Mayor Pro Tem of Covington.
He has been writing stories and books since he was a child and currently writes national park thrillers from the shadow of Mount Rainier.
He has been writing stories and books since he was a child and currently writes national park thrillers from the shadow of Mount Rainier.
To me, each footstep is a whisper.
ReplyDeleteYou often DON'T need to describe it. Instead you write in a way that allows the reader to fill in for himself
ReplyDeleteThey wet-footstepped back towards the house
It's these subtle sounds that stump us. But when you get it right, it's terrific.
ReplyDeleteMight be a little late, but it's the crunch of someone's footsteps on the sand...
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DeleteI would use crunch however I understand exactly where your coming from
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